A-Genius's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madotsuki's Dream Dock]

nice doesn't really look any thing scary I just saw a few silly ghosts and she was just watching the see does it take too long for something scary to actually happens?

Pienkaito responds:

It's all about the atmosphere. Just enjoy the music and surreal scenery.
There's nothing to be scared from.

...hehe.

[At the end.]

It looks like really nice game but there is just too much stuff that need fixing! it's a shame that it have nice graphic but he's walking above the wall in the tutorial level and I get to the next level just by falling off? it isn't really understandable even with a tutorial ... you didn't explain how to fly! also he automatically fly as he like when I fall! ... >.< it's just frustrating game! beside using mouse is a bad idea for movement! I preferred keyboard because it's easier and less buggy! try provide report for those who test it to check if everything is functional before you publish it! I know it's NG Game Jam and there is a little time to do everything! but you should have tried way that will help you get everything done quickly and neat through planning!

FlyingColours responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Spellsword]

It looks really interesting game demo and your right there is no battle system , etc! also was wondering what does "\" button do?!

Hyptosis responds:

ig.. ignore that >_>

[Dress Up Game]

I have a few comments on to upgrade your game:

1- DO NOT use "Photoshop" while creating your flash it does show a neat flash. I prefer to use the "brush tool" In "Flash CS3 while creating your object.

2-Same old dress up game. why don't you be a creative make a new way of dress up game that really give new taste to this game? ..... GET THIS BRAIN THINK OR ELSE >:O

3-Why don't you give the player the choice to listen to the music or not?

jminni3z responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism, about the music, oh dear I am not sure how to make the player choose the music this is why I am still learning, this time I SHALL GET THE BRAIN THINK I know this isn't the best flash game. It's actually my VERY FIRST flash game.
I shall try your tip about using the pen tool in flash, I was drawing this on Paint tool SAI and go carried away with the shadowing, and I had to resize the whole game due to because it was too big. This was why it had such bad quality.
Lastly, I know this is like any other dress up game....again this is my first game I ever made I can improve on my next one!
Yet again, thank you for your criticism, I can learn how to improve on my next game :)